Monday 8 September 2014

ski trip

WALT: describe a moment in time

My body froze like a drop of water put into the freezer.I came down the hill like lighting and bang couldn't stop.I crashed like a stop car.

1 comment:

  1. OMG great story Brayden I really enjoyed it. and did you enjoy skiing because I loved it.

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