Wednesday 27 August 2014

Marshmallows bare bones

WALT: Create a bare bones plan

  1. Boy at campfire cooking marshmallows. 
  2. Something creeps up behind him. 
  3. The boy is scared.
  4. The thing runs away.
  5. The boy is still cooking marshmallows.
  6. The thing comes back.
  7. It was a monster.
  8. He gives him a marshmallows to see if he likes it
  9. All it wanted was the marshmallows.
  10. They both cook marshmallows.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Brayden. well done there. you have done good. my faverete bit was they both cook marshmallows. LOL. From Mackenzie H

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  2. Hi Brayden nice I like that and I love those marshmallows.

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