Wednesday, 23 March 2016

D.L.O

Curious Cove fishing

Curious Cove fishing


WALT: write a descriptive piece of writing.
Success Criteria

The cold wind making my spine shiver.My finger on the line waiting for a bite.boom my rod had a bend in It. I started winding it in. damn it came off. it felt like a big fish. Tony hit the button to move the boat. He stopped in a different spot. we dropped the line in. about 30 seconds after I have another bite. I wind it in. a blue cod but it was too small to keep so I put it back. “damn,” I said.


Wednesday, 19 August 2015

Haiku

Haiku

On a sunny day.
I ride my motorbike fast.

though the mud and dust.

Friday, 14 August 2015

Colour poem

Blue

Blue looks like a hot sunny day.
Blue sounds like a rushing waterfall.
Blue smells like the salt of the blue sea.
Blue tastes like fresh blueberry pie.

Blue feels like the cold drink running down your throat.  

Wednesday, 12 August 2015

Memory poem

Remember

Sitting on my motorbike.
feeling nervous,excited.
The tight helmet on my face.
The smell of petrol up my nose.
I nail the jump.
Feeling excited.
That was my first jump.  

Image result for jump motorbikes

Thursday, 23 July 2015

Made of more

The cloud came from the sea 
he was different from the others 
he done a lot more than other clouds
he was big and happy 
he loved to help people 
he was a cloud made of more.......

Friday, 19 June 2015